Poetry
I ought to know: fraught thoughts grow taut, chemically unsorted.
Maybe I should go; leave, cleave the corded excess of murdered words from the sordid mess of crippled phrases that crazy out my brain stem. But t… what clichès.
Perhaps if I
Arrange, and cook a sentence,
In tiny ways,
So the gaze falls on just,
A
Few, choice words,
A shiny maze,
The moist curds,
Between the warm turds,
This pretention,
Might disguise the lack of invention?
Thought not.

i likey!
This is wizard – clever and funny and tight. ‘Moist curds’. That sounds so dirty.
This is great. Yes, wizardry. You show a real awareness of, and respect for, the reader. Thankyou.
Thanks my lovelies. I’m performing a Tim Henman fist-pump in response to your kind comments. [not in a dirty way]
hmm, expressive. reminds me of the crazed state of mind i was in few moons ago. wrote this:
http://purplecarnations.wordpress.com/2009/01/08/its-happening/
“This pretention”.
LOL. so rad.